A breach in the fantasy-reality-time-continuum makes all Mary Sues lose ten years of her age, so I end up babysitting a bunch of small girls.
(currently discontinued till next PotC-flash)
Babysitting Mary Sue
Erstellt: 30.05.2007
Letzte Änderung: 31.05.2007
Letzte Änderung: 31.05.2007
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1436 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
1436 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Fluch der Karibik
Genre: Humor
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Chapter 1 - Prologue | E: 30.05.2007 U: 31.05.2007 |
Kommentare (1) 1434 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Von: abgemeldet
2007-06-10T15:58:14+00:00
10.06.2007 17:58
Yeah, I'm the first! v^^v So I have the great honor to review this not-mary-sue-fan-fiction *happy* xD
I like the idea of the story and your style of writing. Hope you will have the time to write more chapters.
And to say my opinion: Give her a Gary Stu. Who could be a better prince charming for a not-Mary-Sue than a Gary Stu?
Hope my English is okay ^^°
Yuly
I like the idea of the story and your style of writing. Hope you will have the time to write more chapters.
And to say my opinion: Give her a Gary Stu. Who could be a better prince charming for a not-Mary-Sue than a Gary Stu?
Hope my English is okay ^^°
Yuly
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue