Bella moves to her Father because her Mother loves her new husband more than her daughter.
She's pregnat from a one nightstand she had on her last day in phoenix with a stranger whose name she doesn't know.
My perfect life
Erstellt: 03.10.2008
Letzte Änderung: 25.01.2009
Letzte Änderung: 25.01.2009
nicht abgeschlossen (1%)
Englisch
3424 Wörter, 3 Kapitel
3424 Wörter, 3 Kapitel
Thema: Bis(s)-Reihe
Genre: Romantik
Hauptcharaktere: Edward Cullen / Masen, Bella Swan / Cullen
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 03.10.2008 U: 25.01.2009 |
Kommentare (3 ) 3424 Wörter |
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Prolog Prolugue: Not enough? | E: 03.10.2008 U: 03.10.2008 |
Kommentare (1) 1191 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Kapitel 1 Suprise | E: 06.10.2008 U: 06.10.2008 |
Kommentare (1) 1168 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Kapitel 2 talking | E: 25.01.2009 U: 25.01.2009 |
Kommentare (1) 1063 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Schönes Kapitel.
Hat mir gut gefallen und das Englisch war auch ok.
LG, Autumn
Hat mir gut gefallen und das Englisch war auch ok.
LG, Autumn
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 2: talking
It's most beautiful, not beuatifullest..
and there was an othe rlittle thing.. yeah, it's didn't went, not didn't go.. because it means something like 'nicht gegangen'.
But it was pretty nice.
I'll read the next one.
Autumn
and there was an othe rlittle thing.. yeah, it's didn't went, not didn't go.. because it means something like 'nicht gegangen'.
But it was pretty nice.
I'll read the next one.
Autumn
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: Suprise
Nice story.
I realy like your stile.
I'l wait for the next chapter.
Autumn
I realy like your stile.
I'l wait for the next chapter.
Autumn
Kommentar zu: Prolog: Prolugue: Not enough?