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“Are we clear?”
 

“Crystal!”
 

He almost screamed his affirmation into his cell phone and cut the connection. Considering the situation, he was really calm for these kinds of condition his ex-wife put him in.
 

Well, to be honest, he was always like bitching and bantering but Steve has never seen his partner like this before. Detective Danny Williams has a loving side, like, always you could say, although he was stark sarcastically towards the former Navy SEAL. But he has never ever been so… furious. Danny tried his best to hide it but his anger escaped through every single word he had said to Rachel. He hasn’t been loud, but his voice was growling, rough and scruff. The meaning of his words wasn’t that intimidating. But his scowl was. And so was his voice. Steve couldn’t help it but he got a shiver under the glare his partner gave him and so he immediately forced himself to focus on the road. As always, the SEAL was driving the silver Camaro. But he did his best not to maximize Danny’s annoyance by chasing the car through the streets.
 

“Woah! Watch it!”, Danny yelled, as Steve looked at his partner again and didn’t pay attention to the traffic. They almost crashed into their man in front. Danny growled and Steve was expecting one of his famous rants. But Danny kept silent.



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Von:  MrsTime
2011-11-22T19:20:21+00:00 22.11.2011 20:20
Ich muss ehrlich sagen, ich habe noch nie eine englische Fanfic hier auf Mexx gelesen und fand es zuerst etwas befremdet, aber ich muss sagen es hat mir wirklich gut gefallen. ^^
Deine Geschichte liest sich flüßig und ist auf den Punkt gebracht, dass gefällt mir :D
Geht es an dieser Stelle im nächsten Kapitel weiter oder ist dies eine abgeschlossene Geschichte?
Ich freue mich schon darauf, mehr von dir lesen zu dürfen *__*


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